Overall, this essay provides a good comparison of the lives and accomplishments of Bill Gates and Steve Jobs. It is well written and organized, and provides some good insights into the two men. However, I think it could be more comprehensive in its examination of the two. For example, it does not mention Gates’ work on the Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation, which is a significant accomplishment. Additionally, it does not explore Jobs’ role in the development of the personal computer industry in as much detail as it could.